**The slowly death**

[درباس]

Last night. when i had set with my pen, and with my loneliness


i wrote this poem.. it is my second poem which i wrote ..

i hope you like it and if there any mistakes.. plzzz tell me..


Life is cruel

My soul drifts aimlessly

in the time of hope

It searches tirelessly

for meaning and truth

My inner goes to find

warmth and happiness

But no thing there....

Hate myself
And my life
My eyes seek out
Visions in times
Of want

No one I can gaze

Feel the goodness in all
Forms of life
Love all things
Find the peace in my day

Where are all
These things?

Death is the only solution
Death
Death

Derbas

[مهندس الكلمة]

WoOoOOoow


Derbas i really like what you wrote and i want to tell you
that you have a big imagination and a very nice pen

Keep GOinG

MOhandis Alkalema

[شجرة طوبى**]

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...

hi derbas
very wonderful word
your words looking like
the stars that still shine
and glimmer up high behind
the grey clouds that cover night skies
.......................
you should know the sorrows you feel it and
yesterday's tears, shall be
washed away by the rains of now
For the sun always shines
after the sadness
and beneath, a melancholy
heart remains
Hope you immerse in life’s sweet blessings
...........

.
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[نجم المنتدى]

Very well sister Derbas , you really shoked us !!!

As you have a poetical feeling , why don't you write and show us like sister Tooba ?

[درباس]

Actaully,when i put my poem here ..

i said to myself.. that only three or four member will see

this poem and replying...

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة مهندس الكلمة

WoOoOOoow


Derbas i really like what you wrote and i want to tell you
that you have a big imagination and a very nice pen

Keep GOinG

MOhandis Alkalema

i really thank you a lot

and happy about what you write

and i am trying now
to improve my imagintionand my language for writing more

thanx again

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة شجرة طوبى**

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ملف مرفق 2813

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hi derbas
very wonderful word
your words looking like
the stars that still shine
and glimmer up high behind
the grey clouds that cover night skies
.......................
you should know the sorrows you feel it and
yesterday's tears, shall be
washed away by the rains of now
For the sun always shines
after the sadness
and beneath, a melancholy
heart remains
Hope you immerse in life’s sweet blessings
...........

.
you write better than what i wrote

i am shy beside your words

thank you

.

ملف مرفق 2814

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة *** نجم المنتدى ***

Very well sister Derbas , you really shoked us !!!

As you have a poetical feeling , why don't you write and show us like sister Tooba ?

As i said ..

i will try

thank you my dear brother "star"


Mohands.. Tooba..Star..

you really encourge me for writing

i was over the moon whan i was reading yours


Derbas

[CuTe FrIeNd]

Hi

sis Derbas.....firstly why did I saw the disappointment and discourage feelings covers you poem..... take it easy and live your life normally heheh

secondly...... what a great poem was it!!! meaningful expressions ......accurate description of your situation

hope you the best

your sis

[درباس]

THANK CUTE..

but let me tell that life is
so diffcult

and i reall feel sorrow and disappointment
last week

so that i wrote it ..

Derbas